Meet Emily Mims, the author
of twenty romance novels. Emily combined her writing career with a career in
public education until leaving the classroom to write full time. She plays the piano, organ, dulcimer, and
ukulele and belongs to two performing bands.
She says, “I love to write romances because I believe in them. Romance happened to me and it can happen to
any woman-if she’ll just let it.”
Welcome to Book Blather,
Emily.
Website: http://www.emilymims.com
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Twitter: @EmilyMimsAuthor
Updating a Vintage Story for
Today’s Market
When my editor Chris Keeslar of Boroughs Publishing
bought three of my 1985 romances for re-release by Boroughs, I was thrilled for
many reasons, not least of which was that I thought ‘Great! Three more books on the market I don’t have
to write!’ And in part that was
certainly true. The stories were plotted
and complete manuscripts existed. But…to
my surprise the re-release of a vintage story does require some work on the
part of the author to get that book ready to compete in today’s quite different
market. But getting an older book ready
can be a lot of fun, as I found out in updating ‘Season of Enchantment,’ ‘A
Dangerous Attraction,’ and ‘For the Thrill of it All’ (formerly ‘Dangerous
Interlude’).
So what did updating these books entail? First order of business-do we leave the book
set in 1985 or throw in cell phones and laptops and try to pass it off as
current? There was no question about
‘Season of Enchantment’-it had to stay in 1985 since it involves a rescue
behind 1985 Vietnam’s Bamboo Curtain. So
I limited my changes to this manuscript to correcting the errors the scanner
made (which can be hilarious), taking out a few politically incorrect terms and
making a few other changes Chris requested.
I thought it would be fun to include an epilogue set in 2015 in which we
see how life turned out for the two couples in the story, and if I happened to
plant a seed or two for a story about the children... This was easy-peasy, and the rest would be,
too. Or so I thought.
So I sat down and re-read ‘A Dangerous Attraction’ and by
the time I got to the end I was cringing.
In the original story, again set in 1985, Roger never can accept that
Cecelia’s job involves an element of danger to her, and Cecelia finally gives
up her dangerous street work with the FBI and moves into a less dangerous
position in order to marry Roger. Yes,
that ending worked in 1985-women, even the pioneering women of those days,
routinely made those kinds of professional sacrifices for the sake of marriage
and motherhood, both in real life and in the pages of a book. Today, not so much-in fact, not at all. Women face down bad guys and march off to war
on a regular basis, and a heroine who gave it all up to please her man would be
booed off the Internet. I’m not going to
include a spoiler here, but let’s just say that both the hero and the story got
a major overhaul. I did write another
epilogue set in 2015 so the reader finds out how it all ends for them. We again left the book in 1985 and I actually
added cultural references from the 80’s to add a little atmosphere. This one took some work, but it was worth
it. Today’s version of ‘A Dangerous
Attraction’ is a much more satisfying story than the original, and today’s
reader can identify with my heroine and the choices she makes.
After ‘A Dangerous Attraction’, the upcoming ‘For the
Thrill of it All’ was an easy update.
Again left in 1985, this story had me marveling at how far forensic
science has progressed-my heroine is a forensic chemist for the police
department and what was state of the art when I wrote the book is now
positively archaic. With a more or less
timeless story, the major change I made in this manuscript was to get inside
the hero’s head more and to provide more insight into why he feels compelled to
risk his life for kicks. Again, I added
more in the way of cultural references from the 80’s. And of the three revisited manuscripts, this
one had the most in the way of what would now be considered politically
incorrect behavior-police officers making sexual innuendoes and passes at one another
on the job, smoking anywhere and everywhere, and colleagues mixing their
business and pleasure-that was considered perfectly acceptable thirty years
ago. Needless to say, I left every bit
of the political incorrectness intact!
Taking another look at my stories from the past was a lot
of fun. Hopefully, they will resonate
with my readers as much now as they did with my readers thirty years ago.
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What an interesting exercise this must have been for you. Thanks for sharing the experience with us. Best of luck with the re-releases.
ReplyDeleteIt's great to read what went on behind the scenes, Emily. I loved that time period. Good luck with your books!
ReplyDeleteWonderful write up, Emily! Wish you fabulous fun & many sales w/ your new revisited titles! :)))
ReplyDeleteA fascinating look into your process, Emily! Thanks so much for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the comments, folks!
ReplyDeleteBest, Emily