Those of you who are writers know what it’s like to turn in a book and then wait, sometimes endlessly, for revisions from your editor. For those of you who are readers, here’s a peek behind the scenes. It is impossible for writers to be objective about their own books, which is why we desperately need sharp-eyed editors. Over the years, I’ve written ten books and had nine editors, some good and some, ahem, not so good..
The first book I sold, Castle
Ladyslipper, was to a press I later discovered was on the warning list for
Predators and Editors. Totally my fault. The owner/publisher/editor proceeded
to remove all of my chapter headings and re-arrange them in a system that made
absolutely no sense. Upon my objection, she returned them to their original
order. My second book, The Rock and Roll
Queen of Bedlam, was picked up by
a different publisher and sold quite well. Readers wanted a sequel. I wrote a
synopsis and three chapters and followed instructions to submit to my editor. She turned it down siting the
following reasons: cozies weren’t
selling well and the company decided to focus on horror. #1. The R&R Queen
is not a cozy. #2. Doesn’t look like that horror thing is working out for them.
But, as we know, rejection is part of the game and we soldier on.
Flash forward to my young adult series. I wrote six books for Bell
Bridge Books and had a wonderful editing experience throughout. The best
editor, by far, was Pat Van Wie who now free lances. She worked with me to make
my books shine. I will always be grateful to her.
Since leaving BBB, I’m back to writing adult romantic suspense. My
first book in the Soul Seeker series, Affliction,
came out earlier this year. When I received the edits, I scrolled through the
document. The only editing advice was to remove the word that from each page. She also reversed the words it’s and its throughout the entire document. Not wanting to come across as a know-it-all, I tried to tactfully
explain, “it’s” is a contraction for “it is.” She said, “Oh, you’re right,” and
changed them back. Apparently someone ratted her out (not me) because she is no
longer with the company.
I just finished revisions for Allegiance,
the sequel to Affliction and the
editor, Fran, was a joy to work with. She included helpful suggestions and was
more than willing to listen if I didn’t agree with her. Hopefully, the book
will be better with her help.
Until next time . . . Marilee